Break Up
February 20, 2010 at 12:30 7 comments
In the judaian daylight
Facilitating words, took flight
without feathers nor fear.
A rancorous rhapsody; my dear.
They just drifted apart,
from a whole to a part.
Entry filed under: poetry. Tags: break up, Poem, relationship.
1.
Indian Homemaker | February 24, 2010 at 05:20
Sad…
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guruzee | February 26, 2010 at 00:11
Indeed. A relationship without trust is like a body without its soul.
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Chitra Nayak | March 2, 2010 at 09:30
You are writings are quite good. You really have a way with words.
4.
guruzee | March 2, 2010 at 10:57
Thank you
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Chitra Nayak | March 2, 2010 at 09:55
Will you please suggest how to create a banner with the photos I have created.
Thanks in advance.
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Aayushi | March 15, 2010 at 23:34
That was quite amazing, though written about something sad, written quite delicately and beautifully!
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guruzee | March 16, 2010 at 00:50
The original piece was written about two years ago. It looks quite brazen and unappealing. I had a look at it recently and decided to touch it up. Time, always wins.