The Sage Song

November 23, 2008 at 07:27 7 comments


Dreams, splashed on the tombstone,
Life, its only own enemy!
Heart’s the twisted rotten branch ,
Soul’s the interweaving brook of tears!!

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Will be away for a while!!! Rest In Peace

7 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Ritu  |  November 23, 2008 at 09:55

    – Esprit- Sentience- ZestMy humble contributionhttp://www.phoenixritu.com/

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  • 2. Mampi  |  November 23, 2008 at 10:23

    the word is ‘interweaving’, isnt it? or is it ‘interviewing’ or ‘intervening’??

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  • 3. ~Hemanth~  |  November 23, 2008 at 15:24

    Right you are Mampi; it is interweaving. Will edit that. And Ritu, I like sentience better. I was thinking more like the “Sage’s Song”..

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  • 4. Indian Home Maker  |  November 23, 2008 at 18:00

    Consciousness?I am not good at poetry :(By the way, it’s really nice to see you back in Blogistan 🙂

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  • 5. ~Hemanth~  |  November 23, 2008 at 18:07

    Hi, IHM…I’m glad to be back as well and I appreciate your comments. Not good at poetry? You sure? :)Although, I have technically been back for about a week. Only got a chance yesterday to do some blogging. A week’s vacation means a weeks worth of catching up :)…

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  • 6. Pinku  |  November 24, 2008 at 14:10

    hey!!! u back!!! good….the verse is nice…i would call it the harsh truth.

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  • 7. ~Hemanth~  |  November 24, 2008 at 14:44

    Hi Priyanka, Thanks!!

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